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Contest: June 30th, 2005

Author: Emerick Varga

There was a large house on a hill side. The residents there were forced to dwell there without leaving at any time. What happens in that house no one knows except the previous owner, the keeper. If you can find this man he will tell you the story of how the residents became confined to there abode. I went to this keeper who lived by himself in a two room house surrounded by a dark forest. Even during day can you not see the detail of trees, just a black ring around the field.

The Keeper was an old man who talked in a distorted voice. “I lived in that house with my wife and butler. She was a dark haired woman with brown eyes. She was always delightful and happy. Although she never was nice to the butler, Tony, and he in turn was mean to my wife, Caroline. Caroline always asked me to replace him with a new butler, but he did good work for little pay so I kept him. This decision of greed lead to her murder, which I still hold it upon my self for her death. Tony’s hatred of my wife caused him to murder her. He stabbed her after his hatred of her grew. When I walked in on him standing over the dead body of my wife he began smiling. I stood there in horror frozen, after he started slowly walking toward me he raised the blade causing it to twinkle from the light in my eye. That small twinkle broke my stare and I made a brake for it. I ran to the shed were I kept a shotgun and shells. Cautiously I walked back in, the second I saw him kneeling down I pulled the trigger without hesitation. Slowly he collapsed to his chest lifeless. After I pulled my self together, I first began digging the grave of my wife, once buried I placed five roses on her gravestone. Tony I placed in the back woods without a burial.

A year later I finally was able to find buyers for the house, a young couple Ted and Mary. When I told them that the butler who worked for me haunted the house they thought it wasn’t real and bought the house regaurdless. The first night they stayed they clamed to here a noise as if some one was breathing over them. When I checked on them after the second night they clamed to here a voice say,” leave now or forever stay.” I told them that they should leave now, but they stubbornly stayed. The next morning I appeared again to check on them, Ted started speaking in that distinct voice of Tony and Mary approached me and spoke in the voice of Caroline. I instantly ran back out and figured they had been possess and will stay there for eternal life.



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